Why would you leave the house without money? Why even
bother?
Mika didn’t appreciate the scolding tone that the blonde
woman with dreadlocks and an ornate machine gun swung over her shoulders was
taking with him, but there was little he could do but nod.
Do you want to end up like them?
She was pointing to a group of people sitting in a shelter just
past the tank they had used to block the road. The tank was blurry and hard to
focus on; there was some kind of visual distortion being employed. The
checkpoint itself had seemed to emerge fully out of the drizzling rain, unseen
before he stepped into it. The people in
the shelter looked bored at worst; they were drinking hot liquid out of cups
and eating pastries. Mika kind of wanted to join them, but something in the
blonde’s tone told him no.
I tell you what. You do a little favor for us and we will
let this slide. How does that sound?
Good I guess.
Mika felt okay agreeing. He felt the need to be pleasing in
this situation.
Take this and our man will grab it from you on the other
side. You will even get a little credit for it.
In her hand was a neatly wrapped package.
He nodded and took it. Depending on the next checkpoint this
could mean death. But, he decided to be pleasing so he agreed to it.
The next checkpoint had two helicopters propped on the side
of the road. Glaring blue lights shined from the bank of lights they had strung
up over the road. Pilots encrusted in helmets and hoses sat still in each
cockpit. Mika stood in the light and the drizzle and waited. He willed his body
to not sweat, but it refused.
A child ran out from behind the helicopters and ran a
scanner wand over him. The child paused after doing this, looked up at one of
the helicopters, and then waved him through.
A man walked out of the shadows on the other side of the
bank of lights and put his arm around Mika’s. The man’s face was blurred in
similar fashion to the tank.
Just hand me the package and I will credit your mobile.
Mika complied. The man nodded his blurred head.
Okay walk away and don’t watch where I am going.
The third checkpoint cleaned out his mobile, but gifted him
with a lumpy can of food cubes and a map to the nearest camp. They laughed when
he asked if could sell the can for money but didn’t when he made a joke about
their halftrack covered in pornographic graffiti. They just waved their guns
and pointed in the direction of the camp in response to that.
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